Question:
Compare the two translations on the basis of the following points: (i)the tense of narration (past and present tense) (ii)short, incomplete sentences (iii)sentence length
Answer:
(i)Translation A is in the past t ense while translation B is in the present tense. (ii) Translation A has complete sentences while translation B has short, incomplete sentences. (iii) Translation A has long sentences while translation B has short sentences. I prefer translation B because it is more direct and uses powerful language with a lot of imagery. It uses more personal language which is the way it should be in stories and novels.


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